A Taste of Hint Fiction

Inspired by the NPR broadcast ‘Hint Fiction Celebrates the (Extremely) Short Story’, my father challenged my family to a competition over the holidays. The genre hint fiction is defined by a story of 25 words or less, which stimulates the imagination through its brevity. Take Ernest Hemingway’s six-word story for example. “For sale: baby shoes, never worn.” In the end, five of us participated, anonymously presented our stories, and voted on the favorites.

I imagined a scene taking place on the roads through the mountain pass between the Willamette Valley and the Cascade Mountain Range. Marcus’ story described his morning view on an Amsterdam weekday. My father wrote a mystical tale about time past. My mother wrote about her favorite summer activity, water skiing. My brother found inspiration in murder mystery tales. Below, the stories:

My story:
The mountain pass
She turned onto the all but abandoned logging road,
the entrance graced with a worn-down cross staked into the earth.
Her fingers drummed to the beat of the music, turned just a little louder.

Marcus’ winning story:
9:12 am
Dense fog covering the river makes it difficult to see over to the other side.
The start of the week.

My mother’s entry:
An Afternoon of Surface Tension
Strong breeze creates a tangled mane
Nostrils filled with sunshine
Cool mists in rhythmic sprays
Mechanical roar
That quiets the smiling soul.

My father’s entry:
Below lake waters,
Tossed long ago
Lay ring shining.
Fish fin by, sunlight reflects back
To her hand empty unhealed
It’s giver lay below earthen cover of European war.

My brother’s entry:
Christmas Cheer
Walks on the beach and candlelight dinners and the ad read, but the light kicking in her stomach made her body shake with rage as her fingers tightened around the pistol.

3 responses to “A Taste of Hint Fiction

  1. I’m very impressed with your father’s challenge, and even more impressed with the results of these stories. You all did a great job. Hint Fiction is a challenging exercise, but a fun one. I’m lucky to be one of the contributors in the Hint Fiction anthology (my story is “Playing with Matches”).
    I hope you continue to experiment with Hint Fiction!
    Best wishes in 2011.

    • Hi Kathleen, thanks for the comment! It was really a fun challenge, inspired by the NPR coverage of the Hint Fiction anthology. We did bend the rules a bit, some are more than 25 words, but it was a fun first attempt. Congratulations on your contribution to the anthology! I can’t wait to read it…need to scout it out somewhere in Amsterdam. Best wishes! carly

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